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Donna McArthur's avatar

Thank you so much Renee for opening the door for us to study this poet and his work. To look at poetry through the lens of human becoming is...perfect. It resonates deeply for me so I read on with an excitement I haven't felt in my reading in a while.

First, I enjoyed meeting a poet who is new to me and my enjoyment increased when I could listen to him read his own work! Next was leaning into Ars Poetica!

I felt a palpable lightness and depth at the same time, with my attention fixing on:

A poem should be wordless

As a flight of birds

This descriptor goes beyond sensation, which may have been his reason for choosing it, calling us to feel poetry from a different place within, from the space between everything. I look forward to continued exploration.

Lastly, I love the refreshed look and why you chose the dandelion. It's beautiful and perfect.

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Jacob Bush's avatar

Renee, once again - thank you for some subtle awakening: I do apologize beforehand for being self-promotional - yet, as reflective as the times seem - somehow, a dandelion awakening occurred for me... unexpected... yet, I'm sure the reading here 'carried the seed' of thought...

https://substack.com/@onthejourney/note/c-54258767?utm_source=notes-share-action&r=17fww4

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